18 thoughts on “breathe

  1. Been there, done that, a couple of times, actually. Just let go and something seems to drag you to shore. Seriously…I’ve almost drowned several times and something saved me all three times. So in reality, or metaphorically, your poem works perfectly.

    1. wow, that must’ve been scary, I’m not a strong swimmer so I try and avoid rough waters, but i know metaphorically, I always get stressed and load myself up with commitments so I am too busy to realise how sad I’m getting

      1. I’m so glad, I so love her stuff. It inspired me to just post another one that is so hauntingly beautiful I can hardly stand it 🙂

  2. I love it! Sent from my BlackBerry 10 smartphone on the Bell network. From: Short Poems and Other NonsenseSent: Sunday, April 9, 2017 10:03 AMTo: juliamcgeown@sympatico.caReply To: Short Poems and Other NonsenseSubject: [New post] breathe

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    christophermcgeownwriting posted: “Some people still try To swim when They’re drowning, The trick is To simply stop struggling And breathe.”

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