Some nights
I wished
To become the sea,
And imagined
All of the beautiful
Places
I would go,
And all of the beautiful
Things
I would become a part of–
Essential, beautiful,
Interesting–
Always moving
But never lost.
Feminist, Writer, Cult Classic
Some nights
I wished
To become the sea,
And imagined
All of the beautiful
Places
I would go,
And all of the beautiful
Things
I would become a part of–
Essential, beautiful,
Interesting–
Always moving
But never lost.
Nice piece!
Great thought.
Also I think you missed a space
between ‘apart of’ making it ‘a part of’
if that space is added.
thank you my friend, fixed it after I saw your comment, much appreciated!
Pleasure!
Apart should read a part. Sorry. Sent from my BlackBerry 10 smartphone on the Bell network. From: Short Poems and Other NonsenseSent: Tuesday, March 7, 2017 3:38 PMTo: juliamcgeown@sympatico.caReply To: Short Poems and Other NonsenseSubject: [New post] some nights
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christophermcgeownwriting posted: “Some nights
I wished
To become the sea
And imagined
All of the beautiful
Places
I would go
And all of the beautiful
Things
I would become apart of–
Essential, beautiful,
Interesting–
Always moving
Yet never lost.”
This is a lovely concept!
Lovely poem.
As to spelling, a poet doesn’t need to have his poem reviewed by an English teacher.
Me too!
What a captivating and intoxicating idea and how beautifully you execute the poem
thank you so much:)
You really have a way of painting a picture and capturing feelings with words.
thanks Kim:)